I skipped the deciphering, but noticed the increasing size of each letter unit going along (a neat form!)THAT must have taken some time to work out, to make sure you progressed through the letter lengths correctly.
And then the content of the two stanzas-- such a vivid picture of a horrible weather event in the first, and so much wordplay in the second! kakis, koi, kicking askew a katsura. This is word art in both the literal and lyrical sense. :)
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Date: 2018-10-28 02:42 am (UTC)And then the content of the two stanzas-- such a vivid picture of a horrible weather event in the first, and so much wordplay in the second! kakis, koi, kicking askew a katsura.
This is word art in both the literal and lyrical sense. :)